Kamis, 19 Juli 2012

My sweetest experience in short semeter of writing

 
This Paragraph I wrote when I was retaking the 3rd writing in short short semester with my beloved lecturer, Mr. Dedy Irwansyah M. Hum.

the first is about narrative text,and i got A- from this task.

 
A Sweet Moment in My Life

I could not forget a sweet moment in my life. That  moment occurred when I was still in the Junior High School. I remembered how the people around proud of  me, especially my parents and my teacher. I followed one of singing contest that called PORSENI in 2003. Finally in the last of the event I became the runner- up. The Jury said that actually My voice was sweet but my costume didn’t match with the theme. I just used my uniform but the theme must be used a traditional costume, and they decided me to be the runner- up. I was really proud of my self because I got the scholarship and trophy.



And the second task is a persuasive text, I also got A- from this.

Why The Tube of Liquid Petroleum Gas ( LPG )  Colored Green

In Indonesia colored of 3kg tube of LPG is green. Why the colour is green?
While in another country the colour not always green.
When we remember the proverb said that “ statment is a prayer ” its suitable with the Balonku ada lima’s song. In the lyrics of the song write that “ meletus balon hijau “ or in english “ exploded the green baloon “ thats all right and suitable with the fact, In Indonesia the tube of 3kg LPG often to exploded and may it cause of balonku ada lima’s song.
When we use 3kg LPG we must be carefull, although it one of government program to economize energy it also can be dangerous for us.

the last one is a argumentative task, and it's the final test.
 
 Having  a Boy Friend will Support Student in The Learning

I agree with statment that said “ having  a boy friend will support student in the learning “.
I have three reasons for it.
The first reason is...
“ Boy friend can be a motivator and manager “
I think when I have a boy friend my life feel easier than when I didn’t havve a boy friend.He can be a motivator for me.When Iam down, he gives ne support sothat never give up. All of his said be a suggestion that must I do. He always reminds me to study, to eat and to take a bath, thats all make my daily activity ordered. I feel that I have a manager who manage all of my time.
The second reason is...
“ Boy friend can be someone who can I believe to share my problem “
In this life, I have some problems, like problem with my friends, problem in my study and also economical problem. When I fell I cant save my problem by self, I told it with my boy friend. He always listen to me and gives me advice to be the stronger woman. All of his advice be a new energy for me to face this life.
The third or the last reason is...
“ Boy friend can be a hero any time “
Something that unpredictable often to occured in my life. My boy frien always ready to comes and be a hero.
So... I can conclude that having  a boy friend will support student in the learning, but we must keep always religion and society norm.

Thank  a million for your guidance I promise I'll be better from this class...
miss you so much,, My beloved lecturer Mr. Dedi Irwansyah.

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